Write a letter to the manager of the football club.

You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter

, •introduce yourself

• explain what experience and special skills you have

•tell him/her when you think you could start.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in reference to an advertisement of job which was published on 22 November in Hamilton newspaper.

My name is Dave, and I am 28 years old, I have completed my course regarding “Health & witness” from Mohawk university. During my college days, I was the captain of my football team, thus I pose intermediate knowledge about this sport as well as experience.

I have learnt that you are looking for coach assistant for your club, and I am immensely keen to join your staff as a part time assistant coach. As I mentioned earlier, I am also a football player. I played the FIFA world cup in last year, as team member of UFC club, but due to my heart disease my doctor suggested me to take leave from game for 2 years.

I met all the terms and requirements as mentioned in the job advertisement, so I consider myself a perfect individual for this job due to the fact that I was a professional player, and I can teach your club members a number of skills. I can start from the next week if you would like to arrange an interview then I am available on 22 and 23 November from 8: 00 a. m. to 5: 00 p. m.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Dave Batista

Scoring:-
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resources: 6.0
Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0
Answer all parts of the question
Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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